Started editing the first chapter and immediately decided that I have to write a chapter before chapter 1 because there is some stuff that can only be shown that way.
I also have a problem. In the pre-chapter 1-chapter I want to have my character break up with someone. My idea was a woman, but considering that Bee will end up marrying someone who identifies as a man (and having the XX-chromosomes is only subtly shown so people might miss it) I'm worried that that would make people think the story is too heteronormative, which is not but people being people they might complain. If anyone were to ever read it in the first place.
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I also have a problem. In the pre-chapter 1-chapter I want to have my character break up with someone. My idea was a woman, but considering that Bee will end up marrying someone who identifies as a man (and having the XX-chromosomes is only subtly shown so people might miss it) I'm worried that that would make people think the story is too heteronormative, which is not but people being people they might complain. If anyone were to ever read it in the first place.