Sounds like you have an antagonistic force at work in your story to me! And you've certainly found a way to see it as a positive force as horrible as it actually is... So you have something that leads your protag through a door of opportunity (fight the cancer or let it beat her) - when she steps through it, how does that bring her closer to any kind of love? I have all kinds of questions now ;-)
It's... a complicated relationship between her (Freya) and the guy she loves (Nick). And how the cancer brings Freya closer to love? Well, Nick is just stubborn. :p
I'm glad I managed to intruige you. :-) I like questions. ^^
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I'm glad I managed to intruige you. :-) I like questions. ^^