Not entirely happy with this chapter though. I'm not entirely sure it works, and half of it is spent in astral realms and it's just ... weird. WELL. It makes sense in the story, and I suppose something had to happen to keep my werewolves busy, but, man, I did not want this, even if it was kind of necessary to help one of them recover. But my point remains. It's a bit boring to read. I'll either have to make it not!boring through revision or rewriting. We'll see once December comes.
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Not entirely happy with this chapter though. I'm not entirely sure it works, and half of it is spent in astral realms and it's just ... weird. WELL. It makes sense in the story, and I suppose something had to happen to keep my werewolves busy, but, man, I did not want this, even if it was kind of necessary to help one of them recover. But my point remains. It's a bit boring to read. I'll either have to make it not!boring through revision or rewriting. We'll see once December comes.