Would it be possible to rewrite the scene from another POV? Or do a before and after discussion between characters that would provide the necessary information delivered in the scene for the reader?
Happy to hear that the rest of the story rewrite is going well.
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Date: 2013-04-21 07:23 am (UTC)Happy to hear that the rest of the story rewrite is going well.