Ummm (*checking through last night's haul*), here's my protag's last line:
"That may be Sergeant," Alric said softly. "But let's not make a habit of it shall we?"
I'm trying something a little different this year in that my protagonist is not my POV character. For some reason this seems to be really working for me (*knocks on wood*). My chapter ended with the POV's thoughts:
He did not envy her the task.
...referring to the above "Sergeant" babysitting her superior Lord Alric the Protag.
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Date: 2009-11-03 02:08 pm (UTC)Me? A bit over 10K.
Ummm (*checking through last night's haul*), here's my protag's last line:
"That may be Sergeant," Alric said softly. "But let's not make a habit of it shall we?"
I'm trying something a little different this year in that my protagonist is not my POV character. For some reason this seems to be really working for me (*knocks on wood*). My chapter ended with the POV's thoughts:
He did not envy her the task.
...referring to the above "Sergeant" babysitting her superior Lord Alric the Protag.