Great word count! I wouldn't sweat the tense mix-up - easily fixed later. I suspect that the tense reflects the story as you see it through the character's eyes at that moment. I noticed today that I switched off between first person and third person limited. It was something that just made writing the story easier for now and kept the writing in the groove.
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Date: 2010-11-06 11:13 am (UTC)