Revelations do come unexpectedly and often when we need them or not. That's why we can't cling unreasonably to any outline we might start with at the beginning.
But it seems to me that your MC is settling and I wonder what it is that's she afraid of? Isn't there anything that she really, really wants for herself? Is the arranged marriage a step in that direction?
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Date: 2011-10-23 01:47 am (UTC)But it seems to me that your MC is settling and I wonder what it is that's she afraid of? Isn't there anything that she really, really wants for herself? Is the arranged marriage a step in that direction?